Niagara Falls

The churning current spins,

whirls,

tosses,

turns.

The roaring water crashes,

thunders,

pounds,

plummets

in one grand parade of power.

About Julie

A happy wife, a mom on the learning curve, a daughter of the King . . .
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2 Responses to Niagara Falls

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